Denis Picozzi Poet Rhyme

Respect

So sick of neglect 
		                       Always having hope to be big
                                                       Now I just want to be hid
			    Once a little kid, now a grown man 
				     Just lost all hope
                                                     So I started tying this rope
				            No love 
			      When the family push and shove 
		                    Threat's to be put six feet under
		    The thought is becoming to seem like a wonder 
                                                                 So do it quick
			      Because I've already slipped
                                                               Say I love you
                                                             Don't hear it back 
                                             What I do hear is wind from a crack
			Not from the door, But from the floor
                                            Six feet under, Couldn't ask for more
			        All I've known is love and hope 
                                    But lately all I've been seeing is the end of this rope

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Skat A February 18, 2015 at 10:42 PM Denis, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2015 at 10:20 PM Denis, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Denis Picozzi February 18, 2015 at 1:31 AM Please leave me feedback, I am new to the poetry game and am trying to learn, so please leave advice and tips or any comment will help.