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So sick of neglect Always having hope to be big Now I just want to be hid Once a little kid, now a grown man Just lost all hope So I started tying this rope No love When the family push and shove Threat's to be put six feet under The thought is becoming to seem like a wonder So do it quick Because I've already slipped Say I love you Don't hear it back What I do hear is wind from a crack Not from the door, But from the floor Six feet under, Couldn't ask for more All I've known is love and hope But lately all I've been seeing is the end of this rope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2015 10:42:00 PM
Denis, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:20:00 PM
Denis, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/18/2015 1:31:00 AM
Please leave me feedback, I am new to the poetry game and am trying to learn, so please leave advice and tips or any comment will help.
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