Rescued

he opened the drapes to my soul
and gently stepped into my life
dusting my lonliness away
bright shining light into my day
removing cobwebs here and there
slowly mopping my fears to nought
painting a smile upon my face
so calm and clear my heart in cheer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 12:19 PM
A nice poem Treisha - I like it :) Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 10:26 AM
Very nice use of metaphors Treisha, i liked this , so simple yet so revealing
Williams Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 10:37 AM
thanks
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