Rescue of Dreams

Torn in silence
night covers bygone fantasies
in rescue of dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 8, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Gert this is a very well written verse, I thank you for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell
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February 4, 2010 at 3:33 PM
very forlorn poem, beautiful.
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January 30, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Great Senryu. Thanks for sharing.
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January 28, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Wow Gert what a Senryu. So few words but so much said. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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January 28, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Interesting Senryu that you have presented here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 28, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Excellent Senryu! It seems that within these lines lies the secrets that long to be "rescued" from the captivity of the depths of the writers soul. I am adding this one to my favs. Thanks for sharing this powerful and magical write. Smiles from Lolita
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January 27, 2010 at 9:59 PM
Wow...Gert, this is a beautiful Senryu...A fairy tale dream!! Marty
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January 27, 2010 at 4:24 PM
My dreams are my refuge too,Bygone Fantasies can always be replaced by Sweet realities,Im sure..This Senryu is full of emotions..touched my heart..Charma
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