Rescue Me

Danger
Beware

I plea
Help me

Don’t stray
I pray

Need-be
Pull me

Have faith
I’m safe

Okay
Today

Thank you
Adieu

My friend 
The End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 16, 2016 at 5:16 PM
i like every footle on this poem. SKAT
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January 17, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Thanks a lot SKAT! I appreciate it! >> Christopher
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August 2, 2015 at 10:05 AM
I'm beginning to like this form..saying it all in just 2 lines for each verse..enjoyed
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August 2, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Josefina! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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