Requiem of Natures Realm

A
Tree
Standing
In the breeze
Swaying to and fro
Waving to the watchers below
Help me if you can my time has been short please I beg.
Though my expiration is not death, just rebirth into natures realm everlasting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Truly one of my favorite forms of poetry that you work wonders with here. Spiritual in content and imagery. Awesome work. Love, Shar
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May 17, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Great work, loved the use of imagery...Raul
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May 16, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this well-written poem with us. Karen
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May 16, 2009 at 12:40 PM
What an excellent job you did on this beautiful fibonacci poem! Finding that spiritul place! ~ love, Carrie
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May 16, 2009 at 11:31 AM
Couldn't agree with the feelings you convey in this beautiful poem more, Cecil. The soul and spirit never die. My Dad said that in his living will so we wouldn't feel as bad about having to turn off the respirator. Like you say in your poem, we will find "rebirth into nature's realm everlasting." Love, Carolyn ( And you have mail)
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