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A friend is one who sees you not as weak But in the process of becoming strong Who listens long and well as others speak Not judging but encouraging along Though in the very prime of life, a friend Thought not of me as old or out-of-style With genuine affection he'd extend A laugh, a handshake, hug, or friendly smile And you, kind sir, were just that friend to me Although we met not frequently enough With not a bone of insincerity You lived as advertised: the real stuff We spoke of sports, for this was common ground; Of baseball, football, hoops, and favorite teams Of quarterbacks or pitchers on the mound Of Super Bowl, Olympic, World Cup dreams You're gone too soon; too many words unspoken Too little water passed under our bridge Now through my tears I see that bridge is broken But to have known you was my privilege.

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Date: 7/7/2020 10:21:00 AM
It is a blessing indeed to have such wonderful friends in life and I am sure a genuine person like you deserves them. Your heart warming words are a great tribute to him. Congratulations on your win my friend. God bless you :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 10:36:00 AM
You are too kind, Aditi. Maybe it's just me, but I don't ever feel like I deserve the friends I have, they are blessings of grace to me, never to be taken for granted. I feel I took for granted this young friend, assuming he would be alive a long time. I have learned not to do so. Thank you for the lovely comment.
Date: 7/6/2020 5:06:00 AM
Wonderful tribute.:-) Congratulations on your win John Sir:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring us.Have a lovely day.Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for reading this and sending me your warm comment, Deepa. Enjoy your day ~ John
Date: 7/5/2020 10:00:00 PM
Great write of memories of your friend,John , hard to ignore they are gone. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/5/2020 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for your thoughtfulness. I'm glad this was meaningful to you. Hugs ~ John
Date: 7/5/2020 4:15:00 PM
"too little water passed under our bridge. Now through my tears I see that bridge is no more"- Love this poem, and especially these two lines make me tearful. Congratulations, John.
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Date: 7/5/2020 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, Mala, for your sensitive read and your kind congratulations ~ John
Date: 7/5/2020 3:25:00 PM
A wonderful, blessed poem, my friend. I'm so glad to congratulate you on your high placement. Thank you so much for entering this beauty. I am a better person for having read it
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Date: 7/5/2020 10:27:00 PM
So thankful for your sponsoring this contest, Your placement of my poem, and your kind words, Gina. God bless ~ John
Date: 7/4/2020 9:12:00 AM
Lovely tribute, John.
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Date: 7/4/2020 11:44:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 7/4/2020 7:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 7/4/2020 11:44:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, you too!
Date: 7/2/2020 6:48:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your friend, John. I'm so sorry for your loss. He looks like a kind soul. I can see the sincerity in his eyes. Love and Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/2/2020 8:11:00 PM
Thank you for the condolences, my friend. You are correct, he was a kind soul, and very authentic. A blessing to have known him. I appreciate the visit, Rhonda
Date: 7/2/2020 1:37:00 PM
So sorry about your friend! Friendship is a great thing...those loyal, strong and encouraging!
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Date: 7/2/2020 8:11:00 PM
Thanks for coming by and leaving me with these kind words, Kim.
Date: 7/2/2020 8:58:00 AM
My kingdom for a true friend...heartfelt write Johnny Watts...his smile is worth a million kingdoms...in another time or place, we could be such good friends :o)
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thanks for the visit today, Wingman. He did have a very kind smile, glad you noticed that.
Date: 7/2/2020 3:04:00 AM
It is so sweet; a sincerely wonderful tribute. He looks very young; too young. I am thinking he is smiling as he reads this for I have heard that in heaven they hear and see what we say and write about them in tribute.
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for those comforting words, Caren. He was 29, and very close to marrying my niece. We sure miss him.
Date: 7/1/2020 10:50:00 PM
Wonderful job with this one, your free verse. I forgot to talk to you about that when you discussed it with me the other day. His picture shows him to be so kind.
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:32:00 AM
Yes, this picture really captures the kindness of his soul. He was going to marry my niece. The accident happened 2 months before the wedding. Thanks for the lovely comment.
Date: 7/1/2020 10:06:00 PM
He looks like such a warm person. Such a shame to lose such a person. Why does anyone like him (or you) have to die, dear God? … Oh, I'm just ditzy here for a moment, I guess, John. Enjoyed everything about this requiem. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:25:00 AM
That is one of the unanswerable questions in life, isn't it, my friend? So kind of you to stop by, death of a young one is never an easy topic. Many thanks ~ John
Date: 7/1/2020 7:29:00 AM
Such heartfelt tribute you wrote, John. Every a word is a sincere reward to friendship. His memories live on forever in this write.
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:22:00 AM
You are so right, Vijay, writing helps the memories linger. Thank you for the kind thoughts ~ John
Date: 7/1/2020 12:27:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to a true friend. I think your friend would have the same feelings and thoughts as you John if the situation was reversed. The last line of the verse speaks volumes. Mutual respect is the best recipe for any valued friendship. So very sorry for your sad loss ...
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Date: 7/1/2020 12:37:00 AM
Thank you Shirley, you are truly a dear to say these things. Time eventually heals the wounds, but boy did Tom leave an empty chasm when we lost him. So grateful for your endearing compassion. ~ John
Date: 6/30/2020 3:34:00 PM
what a wonderful dedication to your friend... good friends are hard to come by but they often leave a footprint in our hearts... beautiful write... hugs
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Date: 7/1/2020 12:34:00 AM
You're so right about the footprints, Sandra. The world was a colder place when Tom left it. Grateful for the memories, though. Hugs
Date: 6/30/2020 2:20:00 AM
A very sincere and beautiful tribute to your friend John. May he rest in peace. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:28:00 AM
Thank you for your compassion, Tom. A bright candle was certainly snuffed out that day. Best to you ~ John

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