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Reptilian

in her vertical mouth
her tongue stood out
glowing in the dark
gaping staying open
taking me closer
to pleasing me
pleasing her

the lights were off
her breathing soft
as well as her skin
still leading me in 
with my hunger
the gloworm 
dripping in
a warm

oraface where finally
i find my tongue
touching her's
as the jaws
shut fast
i'm caught
she's a snapping

turtle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/25/2019 8:36:00 AM
Ooh la la. Who doesn’t appreciate a good snapper?
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Date: 11/24/2019 10:10:00 AM
Wild ~x
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/24/2019 5:01:00 PM
Well after my line in "live in the improv" got banned, I had to come up with some other words to talk about IT lol. So a clit becomes a snapping turtle's tongue lol. Seems obvious to me hahaha but oh so painful Maureen :( :)
Date: 11/24/2019 9:25:00 AM
Oh my... sometimes things are worth... the effort... and sometimes not... lovely imagery... haha... had me... loved the ending. Ann
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/24/2019 4:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann.

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