Reptilian

in her vertical mouth
her tongue stood out
glowing in the dark
gaping staying open
taking me closer
to pleasing me
pleasing her

the lights were off
her breathing soft
as well as her skin
still leading me in 
with my hunger
the gloworm 
dripping in
a warm

oraface where finally
i find my tongue
touching her's
as the jaws
shut fast
i'm caught
she's a snapping

turtle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:36 AM
Ooh la la. Who doesn’t appreciate a good snapper?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Wild ~x
Connelly Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Well after my line in "live in the improv" got banned, I had to come up with some other words to talk about IT lol. So a clit becomes a snapping turtle's tongue lol. Seems obvious to me hahaha but oh so painful Maureen :( :)
Foster Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Oh my... sometimes things are worth... the effort... and sometimes not... lovely imagery... haha... had me... loved the ending. Ann
Connelly Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Thank you so much Ann.
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