Reprieve Scattered

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A golden sun tops cobalt clouds
That treasure at day's start
Wispy clouds hang suspended~still
No breeze disrupts the art

Summer days filled with chores unending
Just a few minutes here
When will life give a playful note?
Opportunities appear

Just a second here and there, scattered
Along the warm, sunny day
A Redbird in flight, a Jay's delight
Seems like an hour of play

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2015 5:03:00 AM

your kind of nature exhilarates, sara... love this!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2015 8:15:00 AM

- Lovely summer poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/5/2015 2:42:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

Nipple Twister

Date: 7/4/2015 11:48:00 PM

Nice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 2:16:00 PM

Oh, that last part was so cute the way it was rhymed. this reminds me of the Dietrichs' home. they have bird feeders out on the deck and constantly I am seeing colorful birds as those pictures here.