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Reprieve Scattered

A golden sun tops cobalt clouds
That treasure at day's start
Wispy clouds hang suspended~still
No breeze disrupts the art

Summer days filled with chores unending
Just a few minutes here
When will life give a playful note?
Opportunities appear

Just a second here and there, scattered
Along the warm, sunny day
A Redbird in flight, a Jay's delight
Seems like an hour of play  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Onclaud Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 5:03 AM
your kind of nature exhilarates, sara... love this!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 8:15 AM
- Lovely summer poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:42 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Tfs
Twister Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Nice
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Oh, that last part was so cute the way it was rhymed. this reminds me of the Dietrichs' home. they have bird feeders out on the deck and constantly I am seeing colorful birds as those pictures here.
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