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Replaced




Rumpled lap where your purring body once slept....replaced by a crumpled heart.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Sad One-Liner
Sponsor: Silent One
Judged: 10/12/2016

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Beautiful Scars

October 13, 2016 at 11:42 AM

tears...weep...tears... I know this pain all too well. It's raw in my soul today, I am sorry if you ever felt this way. It's awful. congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy

October 12, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Sweet, beautiful tribute, Sandra. Congrats on your win. Janice

Charlie Smith

October 12, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Such is the loss of such unconditional love, congratulations Sandra...

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 12, 2016 at 11:10 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta

October 12, 2016 at 8:12 AM

So sad. So touchy. Once I felt such pain for a street dog liked by me.

Afzal Nusker

October 12, 2016 at 3:21 AM

That is quite sad. Excellent one liner.

Agnes Krampe

October 11, 2016 at 5:24 PM

Awww - that *is* sad. I have an old cat and know I will miss her very much when she is no longer with us.

CayCay Godwin

October 11, 2016 at 2:30 PM

OK, this is darned good and relates to my own departed, much loved pets, but this is it - I can't take any more sad one-liners, nope - yours put me over, maxed me out. HA Good luck always, Sandra ... CayCay

Sandra Haight

October 11, 2016 at 4:42 PM

Yes, I am sure you know the pain, CayCay...they become family. I just finished reading all the funny one-liners...perhaps I will wait for the sad ones! Thanks for your visit and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra