Repentant

my
sins
brought me
kneeling Lord,
lips whisper remorse
and my eyes beg for Your mercy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:07 AM
Awesome job with this difficult form. Are you going to enter this in Brian Strand's contest? This is really excellent, Teresita !!
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May 18, 2009 at 4:38 PM
Interesting use of this challenging form for an inspirational poem. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing! Karen
Shahwan Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Fascinating poem.
Stacey Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 8:09 AM
i get a really strong sense of emotion from this.
Strand Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Teresita.Rgds Brian
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