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Disagreement within the family..The Bible says don't let the sun go down on your wrath..We did let it go down on our wrath which is not good...A new day has dawned with forgiveness now..
Gray clouds amassed coat the morn sky Damp fills air birds chatter near by There is not peace within What will come from the clouds_unknown Will today there be a storm blown Or will those just have been There is heaviness of heart From disturbance that is my part Lord, help me settle now Hard feelings do not need to have Love can not flow in need of salve Lord, let me repent now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2012 8:52:00 AM
a lovely spiritual piece, my friend - one we all need to follow
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:17:00 PM
I like how you related nature to repentance in this one, Sara. You are such a spiritual person. (the Captcha this time says STAR!!!)
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful Sara, just beautiful !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/4/2012 10:06:00 AM
Ps. Smile ˜ "The Searcher of Hearts * I Love Your Beautiful Poem & Its Beauty Shall Be A Favourite, Just Like 'You.'" ˜
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:57:00 AM
Smile ˜ Shall I Be Completely Open & Honest With This, Your Precious Beauty, My Dear Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Not Even The Angels Fallon At This Point In Time, I Believe, Are Beyound Loves Redemption ˜ We As Humanity These Tiny Babies In Truth, Were Given The Gift Of Love Endless, Upon A Cross * A Verse In Redemption Written Amid The Stars, Afore The Foundation Borne * Your Beautiful Poem, Is A Bright Light Stirring Deep Inside, Love's Endless Heart * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:59:00 AM
...."Also, Thank You For Your Beauties Visit * I Count It As Only 'Joy.'" ˜
Date: 5/4/2012 7:54:00 AM
Ive never read a tail-rhyme before Sara, Im pleased yours is the first I ever have, lovely write xxx Hugs
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