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Disagreement within the family..The Bible says don't let the sun go down on your wrath..We did let it go down on our wrath which is not good...A new day has dawned with forgiveness now..

Repentance

Gray clouds amassed coat the morn sky
Damp fills air birds chatter near by
There is not peace within
What will come from the clouds_unknown
Will today there be a storm blown
Or will those just have been

There is heaviness of heart
From disturbance that is my part
Lord, help me settle now
Hard feelings do not need to have
Love can not flow in need of salve
Lord, let me repent now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:52 AM
a lovely spiritual piece, my friend - one we all need to follow
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 11:17 PM
I like how you related nature to repentance in this one, Sara. You are such a spiritual person. (the Captcha this time says STAR!!!)
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful Sara, just beautiful !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Rhinem Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Ps. Smile ˜ "The Searcher of Hearts * I Love Your Beautiful Poem & Its Beauty Shall Be A Favourite, Just Like 'You.'" ˜
Rhinem Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Smile ˜ Shall I Be Completely Open & Honest With This, Your Precious Beauty, My Dear Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Not Even The Angels Fallon At This Point In Time, I Believe, Are Beyound Loves Redemption ˜ We As Humanity These Tiny Babies In Truth, Were Given The Gift Of Love Endless, Upon A Cross * A Verse In Redemption Written Amid The Stars, Afore The Foundation Borne * Your Beautiful Poem, Is A Bright Light Stirring Deep Inside, Love's Endless Heart * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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May 4, 2012 at 9:59 AM
...."Also, Thank You For Your Beauties Visit * I Count It As Only 'Joy.'" ˜
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May 4, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Ive never read a tail-rhyme before Sara, Im pleased yours is the first I ever have, lovely write xxx Hugs
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