Repent At Leisure


heart seeks, God complies
too late we see our error ~
let’s blame it on fate

10-May-2022

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David Kavanagh

May 10, 2022 at 9:12 AM

Heya Seeker, Amazing how if you change God and fate around, makes your haiku more realistic of everyday events, when people lose faith, but I’m guessing you already seen this eventuality, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker

May 10, 2022 at 9:39 PM

Given that there is no separation from God, free will chooses as of heart’s yearning. Now, if heart’s desire is not love aligned, we go astray. We manifest our reality but know not what to seek.