Repent At Leisure

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heart seeks, God complies too late we see our error ~ let’s blame it on fate 10-May-2022

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David Kavanagh

Date: 5/10/2022 9:12:00 AM

Heya Seeker, Amazing how if you change God and fate around, makes your haiku more realistic of everyday events, when people lose faith, but I’m guessing you already seen this eventuality, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/10/2022 9:39:00 PM

Given that there is no separation from God, free will chooses as of heart’s yearning. Now, if heart’s desire is not love aligned, we go astray. We manifest our reality but know not what to seek.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2022 8:35:00 AM

And that would lead to despair.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/10/2022 9:40:00 PM

Waves of cause & effect …