Repent and To Heaven Sent God Meant

when we will repent
by God to heaven are sent
which is His intent

we always do dread
many tears we will have shed
when fine friend is dead

heaven for us will wait
with God do have a date
we did celebrate

for those over there
are always in our each prayer
love and for do care

had day of healing
will always be appealing
sitting or kneeling

by God have been willed
hopes and dreams that He fulfilled
waves on water stilled

love being with Lord
on His ship we are aboard
saved on it are stored

Would welcome your criticism
and comments. Think that the
Brunswick Beacon should have
a poetry page. This would make 
them more literary and appealing.
They do have a new editor there
who just happens to be a Carolinian
who graduated from a Carolina
University.
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December 7, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Where is all of the criticism?
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