Repeat

You melted me and my heart
from the very start
you were a huge part of my life 
that is until you took out the knife 
you swung and swung 
while my heart still sung 
the song you left on repeat
the song that made my heart beat

betrayalballad

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akira artlyy

September 17, 2026 at 6:42 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

April 27, 2024 at 5:55 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.