Repast

Above swifts feast and fly mistles' munch snails nearby- tea-time on the terrace, this hot July.

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Sandra Hudson

Date: 7/2/2009 5:17:00 PM

Read my comments on both of your most recent poems. Did you check out that link? Did you move your mouse over it and watch the names appear? Isn't it awesome?-AA

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/2/2009 12:00:00 PM

Soup mail, for Brian! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/2/2009 7:24:00 AM

I could use a few of your mistles to munch the snails that munch my petunias!!! :) Pour an extra cup of tea for me...sounds like a lovely place to be...snails and all!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/2/2009 6:44:00 AM

Love the title and the picture that you paint so well..I can see it all unfolding.

Sandra Hudson

Date: 7/2/2009 3:29:00 AM

Brian, you have given us snipets of how things look from your point of view, since most of us have never been to England, can you describe what you see from your terrace? Just wondering.:))-AA thanks in advance