Repast

Above
swifts feast and fly
mistles' munch snails nearby-
tea-time on the terrace, this hot
July.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hudson Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Read my comments on both of your most recent poems. Did you check out that link? Did you move your mouse over it and watch the names appear? Isn't it awesome?-AA
Richards Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Soup mail, for Brian! :)
Richards Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 7:24 AM
I could use a few of your mistles to munch the snails that munch my petunias!!! :) Pour an extra cup of tea for me...sounds like a lovely place to be...snails and all!
Higgins Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Love the title and the picture that you paint so well..I can see it all unfolding.
Hudson Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:29 AM
Brian, you have given us snipets of how things look from your point of view, since most of us have never been to England, can you describe what you see from your terrace? Just wondering.:))-AA thanks in advance
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