Repairs 2 Claustrophobia

claustrophobia...
furniture hissing at heels
— kissing time away

8/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Kissing time away! I wish I had thought of that line, it is a classic. Nicely done, Kim. I know when the renovations are over you will forget this time so it is great you are writing about it while it is fresh!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 9:03 AM
For sure! I know it’s all part of living.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 5:56 AM
A Greek word very well defined dearest, Kim! Excellent!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Awesome! Thanks, Demetrios!
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Cute,,,
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Green Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 2:05 PM
It really does feel weird to be displaced, especially in your own home. :) Funny Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Yes, it is, my friend! A three week repair. But other crazy remodeling mishaps as well! <3 Kim
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