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Repair the Tear

Repair the Tear Ripped and torn apart Wishing we could just restart Where are you, comforter? Will you only watch as everything falls apart? Repair the tear Pick up the shattered dreams Drown out the splintered screams Where are you, comforter? Nothing is ever as it seems Repair the tear Drown them in sorrow There will be no tomorrow Where are you comforter? Spread your sorrow Repair the tear What have you done? Why are we only one Where are you, comforter? Everything is coming undone Repair the tear Repair the tear There is no resolve They all just self-revolve Where are comforter? they dissolve Repair the tear There is no repair Ripping open the tear There is no comforter Falling into despair Tear the repair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/29/2012 9:20:00 PM
I agree with the comments down below but I must also add-- AWESOMTASTICAL-COOLBEANERIFICAL amazingness. And. . . . yes, I'm done. :J Always, Laura
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Rebecca Larkin
Date: 11/1/2012 9:14:00 PM
hehehe thanks Curly-frIIIIeeezzz :D hehe
Date: 10/27/2012 4:13:00 PM
One truly touching poem Rebecca, you write very well. Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Rebecca Larkin
Date: 11/1/2012 9:14:00 PM
thank you! :)
Date: 10/27/2012 3:06:00 PM
"There is no resolve They all just self-revolve sometimes in the course of a poem you strike the essence that youre looking for. So good Rebecca
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Rebecca Larkin
Date: 11/1/2012 9:13:00 PM
Thanks very much Justin! :D

Book: Shattered Sighs