Renovation

The old house whispers
Return me to yesteryear
Reveal my Secrets

mysterysenryu

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Nette Onclaud

September 18, 2014 at 1:14 PM

so many stories from a house being rebuilt.. this is finely-crafted, judy.. wow.. huggs

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 7:53 PM

Nice Senryu Judy... Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 9, 2014 at 12:59 PM

These three short lines can give us all so much to think about . We all see a different house and probably different ways to restore them. As for secrets we could fantasize all day. Brilliant Senryu Judy.

Judy Konos

September 9, 2014 at 1:04 PM

Thank You!

Andrea Dietrich

September 7, 2014 at 12:23 PM

how cool. I love the title you gave it too!

Judy Konos

September 9, 2014 at 1:05 PM

Hey Girl...thanks and congrats on all your many wins! Go Andrea!!!

Keith Merritt

September 6, 2014 at 11:00 PM

I find this especially appropriate for the coming fall and Halloween. Old houses whisper their stories...If we could just listen ! The future comes full circle... a very good Senryu, Judy !

Judy Konos

September 9, 2014 at 1:06 PM

Keith...Thanks a bunch and a half!