Renovation

RENOVATION
"A battle against yourself is the thorns on a rose." 
                       ~Miranda Lambert

I walk
Head held high
Through a low valley
Searching … seeking … fighting…
Myself~

I am the sand
That buries my feet
Deeper
With every step I take

I pull myself down
Every step makes me weaker
I deceive my own eyes, and drown
Them in lustrous beauty

Deceit tells no truth~
Greener grass
Bluer seas
Seems preposterous to let pass
My mask is so divine
Nothing’s the same in a looking glass

Inviting myself to stay
Welcome arms wave my way
Deep into my allure
My own hypnosis forbade me to stray

Blinded by my eminent veil
That lured my feeble mind in rapt
Forthwith rooted myself in an underland
With silent moans of the entrapped
Over evil, good shall always stand

True sorrow sets my spirit free
Awake to delicate light
As it glimmers through my window
I hit my knees at the glorious sight

I’ve fought myself down an onyx road
At a time torn myself, borderline
I paid myself a visit
Defeated my inner monster’s shrine 

She refuses to remit~

Asks why do I fight scared
I thought we love the life we lead
Here’s your chance to choose your destiny
Time to emit your final plead

Not guilty~

Inner demon from me part
Clean parchment, brand new quill 
I can now renovate my heart

©2011-06-27
Miranda Lambert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/30/2011 10:35:00 AM
this was so well written nicely done I really liked it. cory
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Miranda. It is a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:28:00 PM
Lovely philosophical and creative expressions on renovation, Randa
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Date: 6/27/2011 1:42:00 PM
wow Randa...most powerful write ..most elegant presentation.. great example for us to glean our own entry .. luv the feet in buried sand line.. and clean parchment brand new quill.. starting over is half the fun as difficult as it is ..it is the challenge that makes the success luv.. thankxxx..
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Date: 6/27/2011 11:45:00 AM
a most beautiful and well written creative piece of fine poetry.
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