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Renewed

I once was there up in the air floating on clouds of dreams but now I've fallen into the depths more of a nightmare it seems Inspiration has gone astray and life toned to a blue Illusions seemed easily portrayed until I finally saw you You stood there fluffing your hair reaching up to the sky with beauty so grand skin like fine white sand I couldnt believe my eyes I quickly looked at the ground searching for trails of water Glancing around her border convincing myself a hot day like this a mirage was surely in order And as I glared across the way you looked up and you smiled Ever since that fateful day rest assured my dear I still stare at you a while

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Date: 8/6/2010 1:53:00 PM
sweet love note! enjoyed!
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:34:00 AM
aw I enjoyed this great poem c:
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