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Renewal

Melted down pure Forged with hammer anew God's hands much the same

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 10:06:00 PM

Good one on the creator of us all, Tim. Thanks so much for your comment today.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2012 5:09:00 PM

Got that right..On the potter's wheel is not just whee, woohoo is it?..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2012 7:20:00 AM

A wery GOOD haiku Tim!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 9:48:00 PM

Tim, how are you??? One command after another... I like to think that gold will never compare to the sanity of GOD... Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. ;-) have your self a wonderful and fun Valentine's day~ xox~always..pd

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/12/2012 3:55:00 PM

So much said and to ponder in this gem. Well written my friend. Michael.