Renegade Son

Renegade against time with vision and 
Isolated from yourself, the sun does not cover, you  
Centered on dreams too big for life
How you dream those big dreams,
And life’s passing you by. 
Renegade son do not eat the apple.
Don your amour and free the princess
O, free the princess!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/25/2012 9:37:00 AM
Fresh and new perspective. Welcome to PS.
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Date: 7/16/2012 11:17:00 AM
This is less lonely than your first write I'd read!:) Looks hopeful, oh I like this one!:) "Do not eat the apple", sounds scary, better to "free the princess", in any books I've read!! Hope your 'Renegade son' comes to your rescue!! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 7/15/2012 7:48:00 AM
Work of art! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:39:00 PM
don't let your dreams past you by,get rid of the renegade son,great write Sherese
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/3/2012 3:59:00 PM
Sure, thanks though.
Date: 7/1/2012 5:49:00 PM
Blessings to you...Princess' deserve to be free...cool poem.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 6:13:00 PM
Indeed. Thanks.
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