Renegade Son

Renegade against time with vision and 
Isolated from yourself, the sun does not cover, you  
Centered on dreams too big for life
How you dream those big dreams,
And life’s passing you by. 
Renegade son do not eat the apple.
Don your amour and free the princess
O, free the princess!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Fresh and new perspective. Welcome to PS.
Mac Donald Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 11:17 AM
This is less lonely than your first write I'd read!:) Looks hopeful, oh I like this one!:) "Do not eat the apple", sounds scary, better to "free the princess", in any books I've read!! Hope your 'Renegade son' comes to your rescue!! Best wishes, Mikki
Wellington Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Work of art! One love. Joy Wells
Palmer Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 3:39 PM
don't let your dreams past you by,get rid of the renegade son,great write Sherese
Gooden Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Sure, thanks though.
Wright Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Blessings to you...Princess' deserve to be free...cool poem.
Gooden Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Indeed. Thanks.
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