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Rename It the Heartbreak Hotel

the owners decided to rename the honeymoon suites hotel after so many marriages got off to a terrible start two of the brides had died in their sleep the first night the ghost of this place is howling as I type this, I know. six grooms have jumped off the balcony to their deaths. no, I am not inside a room typing this. I am across the street. whatever is haunting that place is too intensely evil for me. it should be the Heartbreak Hotel if you ask me.

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Date: 4/17/2023 11:05:00 AM
Hello Caren, It would be perfect name. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2023 11:12:00 AM
It would be a perfect name, but would anu=tone stay the night in the hotel? Hugs. /Darlene\
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2023 7:00:00 PM
I thought so too Darlene

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