Remnant Hope

Your words came to me so sharp like blades on my heart. 
For i had struggled in sweat and tears to play in this life my part.

Now lay i on my tinny brains. 
Trying in futility for in.the end it still go down the drains.

Am in the middle of the road now,yet don't know in which direction to turn. 
There is a lot of pain in my heart and my brain is black from confusing burn.

Death seems now a solution to peace.
Yet i don't want to because fear entangles my body and
weakens me from having even a little peace.

My destiny has been re-written without permission. 
And here am left now in this world struggling at my blood 
point for yet an impossible mission.

There is now no hope for tomorrow. 
And my life full of blessings and great hopeful end is history 
some few seconds ago. 

Oh you wicked unknown,why did you choose me ?
Of all men that walked on this earth is it only me you see?

I will look from above and wait.
For my hook for a brighter future he alone can provide a perfect bait. 

No dream left now. 
Re-write my destiny oh Gracious hand so with a smile i can once 
again raise to some hope my eye brow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/7/2014 4:03:00 AM
A POEM OF GREAT HOPE
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Seth Agyei Asamoah
Date: 1/7/2014 4:14:00 AM
thanx Syam for the encouragement. :)
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