Remnant

Yesterday's daisy chain lies limp on the floor As it has done many times before Though just a remnant of a sunny day It makes me smile anyway Contest : ANY 2011 POEM max 14 lines Places 2nd

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Nick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2011 8:45:00 PM

this is so sweet. Congrats (belated one!) in Brian's contest.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/15/2011 9:55:00 AM

Nice little write, conjuring up a vivid image.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2011 8:24:00 AM

Love the simplicity of this!! (ps...makes me think of the actual Daisy Chain I was involved making during my High School days! Girls in my junior class formed chains of daisys for the graduate's to walk between on their way to receive their diplomas...(many years ago!) Thanks for the memory!

Cory Long

Date: 6/11/2011 7:44:00 AM

congrats on your win with this great piece. cory

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/31/2011 7:43:00 AM

Cheers Dear! enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 1:35:00 PM

Super one Nick.. luv this title too.. your words really speak volumes luv.. enjoyed and so great to see u posting.. making u a fav poet my friend ..luv..