Remiss Is the Fool

Sinister in their ways do they try and escape

	declaring their guile as an object ornate

Trudging ever nearer toward revelation's delight

	blinded are they in passion's height

Evoking freedom's curse a duo becomes one

	where will they run when one has become none

Rife are the ways in which judgement falls on their short sight

	leaving with it grace's dimly fostered light


Careening into oblivion they look on with no fear

Evanescent is the hope of those unwilling to hear

Sacrificial is the altar they've come before kneeling

	reviling, despising, conniving, and stealing

Enamored with self pity the pain becomes clear

	"forever by your side" they feign and jeer


Regard they give with a skip and a wink

	to courtesy, civility, and care's missing link

Obdurately they succumb to no tyrannical rule

	seeing God as a crutch and an Old Heavenly Fool

Marring their passion they confuse for a soul

	they feast from the compassionate heart as though it were a bowl

Offal has spoken in character of their obsession

	the pieces lay scattered, rotting with digression

Naivety is my home in which I pray for confession

	oh Holy God, find in them a will broken at Your Son's Concession

Truly naive is my compassion in brokenness for those who look on with blind 
eyes, and listen with deaf ears.  God save us from the torment we invite and the 
just rewards from the harvest of our lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 7/9/2016 12:55:00 AM
J J J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Love ~SKAT~
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