Reminiscing

Reminiscing There are hours when I still long to hold you in my arms. I feel strong, thinking about what I know of your charms. Constantly living with these feelings gives one cause for alarm but as reality would have it, reminiscing can do no harm. So my dear Xiao Ling, memories of you will continue to ring, at my memories hoards – door -, your sweet voice doth sing to the ears of my soul, your spirit, to me, a dance doth bring. So, if there is nothing else for me ?, knowing you, is a great thing ! B, J. “A ” 2 March 25th 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 3/27/2015 11:14:00 AM

Beautiful write, sire. Where reminiscing brings joy and good memories, it is a blessing. The heart is full of good things and is not bitter, therefore, able to appreciate whatever positivity those memories bring. A 7. Glad to see this light poetry from you, sire. More smiles from the isles! Kim :)

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 3/27/2015 2:05:00 PM

“ Beautiful write, sire. ” So very sweet of you to think so Kim Patrice. Thank you for “ Glad to see this light poetry from you, sire. ” that my Dear, although the subject matter might have been heavy, it always came from a light place, just out there and honestly expressed . Be- good, take care !!! Bill .