Reminiscing

The dreams we once knew.
Turned to the life that we live.
Has it happened for you?
Did you truly give
it your best try?
Is there something missing?
Can you live in the lie?
I'm lost reminiscing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 30, 2010 at 4:18 AM
As a man thinks in his heart, so is he...a wise man once said. (Jesus Christ) Allan, your heartfelt words made me reflect on His wisdom. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 19, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Allan. Love, Carol
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