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Reminiscent

Lets get in the car, Go far and chose to lose time deep in my mind there you are, Drive into the night and ignore the calls, If this is so good how can it be so wrong? Looking at the stars falling so long, Looking at the stars most of them gone, Believe me we can take it easy to please and appease sleep, So close she breathing on me, So close it makes my knees weak, Ill always be respectful and respect your temple, Now let us pause in the distance while reminiscing over this visual, Have you ever fell in love so much you'd do anything for that touch? So lady protect your health and yourself and everyone else, And please respect my impatients from temptations, Let out all the frustrations all is well hell what are we waiting for, The basic relations wide awakened after the storm. Have you ever fell in love just like such that nothing else means that much? You were my personal garden of Eden, From the evening clear through the weekend, Loving with no speaking just heavy breathing, A quarter inch from the cleavage her reason for all this teasing, Lets be gentle if the interest is mutual, Waiting on this earthly heaven eventual, spiritual With all this potential in a touch that's oh so sensual, Please tell me why would we want to go? (2009)

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Date: 8/6/2017 9:38:00 PM
Hi Corwin, there are so many memorable moments in this poem! :)
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Corwin Donovan
Date: 8/6/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thank you. Its old but I am hoping it shows diversity and growth. I can't wait to read your next poem :^D
Date: 8/2/2017 6:14:00 AM
Perplexingly good!
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Corwin Donovan
Date: 8/2/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you

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