Reminiscence

Once upon a time undefined by algorithm
In your arms you had me
As we slow dance to mild blues 
Our hand and legs in a lover's tango
Like a puppet,you spun me to the rhythm
The walls echo my laughter and glee
So carefree, a heart that never felt a bruise
Once upon a memory forgotten long ago

Your tight grasp slipped away
It hurts to remember
The tempo increasing 
How you caught on but I was stuck 
know your place! you said,make it work! they said but u were faraway
I helplessly watched our fire burn out to a dull ember
Your whispered promises of a life of love unceasing
Were forgotten or did I run out of luck?

Once upon a time I blamed me
It was a race and I  couldn't keep up
Sunbeam cast it's glow of a new beginning
I was more than enough,too much for a coward 
If two do not work together,how do they agree?
I rock to the morning beat with a sherry in my cup
I am lucky, I am free, I am winning
One step at a time,never again will I  look backward.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/2/2019 4:53:00 AM
Your are quite an amazing writer!;)
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Date: 11/9/2019 4:03:00 AM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 10/23/2019 7:46:00 AM
Oh, this moved me..I Coukd see you dancing..then loss and now going forward. Lovely poem Panagiota
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Date: 10/23/2019 11:30:00 AM
Thank you lovely Panagiota. I just had to move on. Getting stuck in d past isn't emotionally healthy.
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