Reminisce

Memories
Absorb like a sponge
Soaked up Space
Squeeze just right
Drips a smiling
Face

Memories
Liquid life
Poured through
A retractable screen
Characters revise roles
Of a movie 
Already seen

Memories
Splash again
Across your eyes
Rain soaked
Laughter
Makes you cry

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Wow Itme

Date: 8/17/2012 10:25:00 PM

i like it...u write really well...thanks for reading my poem

Chris Lane
Date: 8/17/2012 10:56:00 PM

Thank you Desiree!!!

Kerry Singleton

Date: 8/17/2012 4:56:00 PM

I like Chris :)

Chris Lane
Date: 8/17/2012 10:56:00 PM

Thanks Kerry!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2012 4:18:00 PM

Very good poem Chris ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Lane
Date: 8/17/2012 10:55:00 PM

Thanks Anne!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 7:55:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Chris. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Chris Lane
Date: 8/17/2012 4:18:00 PM

Carol, thanks alot! Glad you enjoyed and took the time. Chris

David Williams

Date: 8/17/2012 1:07:00 AM

Chris, I like this journey through a life...David

Chris Lane
Date: 8/17/2012 4:17:00 PM

Thanks David! Thank your for your time and words.