Remembrance of Me

The mirror is deceptive.
 Not in what I see,
 but in what I see in me, 
In the remembrance 
of what I Used to be..

Is this my true smile
the grin on this face
 has been some how misplaced
Altered by the changes in this world
I have made..

Behind this mask
 myself I do ask
 where have I misplaced
the person who used to live inside this soul

I wait at night
 for the dark to surround me
For the night to smoother
 and suffocate me.
My mind runs like a child
 and sleep I never gain..

So now my secret is told..
During the day why I’m
 happy all the time,
Its not because it is me,
Its because I choose to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 3, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Its like you went on my mind and put it down in words! So talented!
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December 3, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Rachelle. Love, Carol
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December 3, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Thanks you so much! :)
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November 27, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your win, Rachelle! love/hugs, Leonora
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December 3, 2012 at 8:15 PM
thanks you so much! :)
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November 27, 2012 at 1:46 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Rachelle xx
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December 3, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Thanks you so much! :)
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November 26, 2012 at 9:42 PM
Rachelle,. Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry
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December 3, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Thanks you so much! great experience :)
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November 18, 2012 at 12:52 PM
Pretty earnest!
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December 3, 2012 at 8:16 PM
thanks you :)
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