Remembering When

I remember when…
The light went from my life, 
The tunnel grew dark
How would I find my way? 
 I couldn’t find my ark.

I remember when…
Lost forever and a day  
Darkness had descended
Sucking spirit away
Love arrived, darkness ended.

© GG 16/06/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 3:38 AM
this poem reminds me, of when i read your first poem here on soup, one could say your last line is so fitting,, love this Mandy
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Sad but with a happy ending. I'm happy for you. A wonderful entry for this contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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June 16, 2013 at 3:58 PM
wow...pd
Harrell Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Deep one, Mandy. Glad you came out of it. Love ya, Toquyen
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