Remembering, the Afterglow

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Sitting on these train tracks, wondering,
Are you dreaming of me, as I do you?
Do you remember our love as explosive, thundering?
Sitting on these train tracks, wondering,
Is your heart still throbbing as mine, still rumbling?
Can these ambivalence notions of hope be subdued?
Sitting on these train tracks, wondering,
Are you dreaming of me, as I do you?

Juanita Warden 
Copyright © 2011(All rights reserved)

IN THE AFTERGLOW, contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/2/2012 7:21:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Juanita. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Juanita on your triolet being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:44:00 PM
Congrats on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share with luv..
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations Juanita on your well deserving poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Juanita. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:55:00 PM
Nice take, Juanita. Congrats.
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Juanita
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:48:00 PM
Juanita, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congrats Juanita on your seventh place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry luv...
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Date: 8/7/2011 2:23:00 PM
Juanita, good luck in the contest with this wonderful write.~Glenna
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Date: 8/5/2011 9:23:00 AM
Nice take on the contest, Juanita
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Date: 8/5/2011 2:48:00 AM
If I were on the train tracks I would also be dreaming of another too! Great descriptions of romantic thoughts :)
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