Juanita Warden Poet Triolet

Remembering, the Afterglow

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Sitting on these train tracks, wondering,
Are you dreaming of me, as I do you?
Do you remember our love as explosive, thundering?
Sitting on these train tracks, wondering,
Is your heart still throbbing as mine, still rumbling?
Can these ambivalence notions of hope be subdued?
Sitting on these train tracks, wondering,
Are you dreaming of me, as I do you?

Juanita Warden 
Copyright © 2011(All rights reserved)

IN THE AFTERGLOW, contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 2, 2012 at 7:21 AM I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Juanita. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. November 6, 2011 at 9:30 AM Congrats Juanita on your triolet being featured. God Bless. Vince

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 1, 2011 at 8:44 PM Congrats on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown October 31, 2011 at 12:36 PM Congratulations Juanita on your well deserving poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 10:44 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Juanita. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones August 14, 2011 at 8:55 PM Nice take, Juanita. Congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2011 at 8:38 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Juanita

John Freeman August 14, 2011 at 5:48 PM Juanita, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:34 PM Congrats Juanita on your seventh place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry luv...

Sunflower Poetess August 7, 2011 at 2:23 PM Juanita, good luck in the contest with this wonderful write.~Glenna

Dr.Ram Mehta August 5, 2011 at 9:23 AM Nice take on the contest, Juanita

Russell Sivey August 5, 2011 at 2:48 AM If I were on the train tracks I would also be dreaming of another too! Great descriptions of romantic thoughts :)