Remembering Me

Remembering Me

I dreamed of you once
You were just a child
Running through a field
Hair; tangled and wild

Reflections of the sun
Danced across your face
And I wondered aloud
How do I know this place

You sat down cross-legged
Under a magnificent tree
You were singing a song
With a familiar melody

I sang along; eyes closed
And tried to remember
When I had loved life 
With as much fervor

Soft rain began to fall
So I joined you there
You made a daisy chain
And placed it in my hair

Ring-around-the-rosy
And hide-and-seek we played
Peek-a-boo and Simon says
A memory in time was made

I wish I could be like you
I whispered in the wind
Being free and young again
Enjoying games of pretend

I didn't think you'd heard me
You looked at me and smiled
I am you, you see here now
You've just been gone awhile

I'm a book you forgot you'd read
I've been hidden in your heart
Just take me out and dust me off
And you'll remember where to start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/7/2023 5:49:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you!
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Tina Rhymer
Date: 1/12/2023 10:17:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/5/2023 9:16:00 PM
This made incredible sense to me and tugged at my heart "I sang along; eyes closed And tried to remember When I had loved life With as much fervor"
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Tina Rhymer
Date: 1/12/2023 10:18:00 PM
I was remembering my grandma when I wrote this. She was my very best friend! Thank you
Date: 1/5/2023 9:08:00 PM
Well written and so enjoyable to read, thankyou for sharing dear poet
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Tina Rhymer
Date: 1/12/2023 10:19:00 PM
Thank you!
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