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. This morning I'm still smiling . . from our words of love last night, . . The thunder's cries could not outdo . . The softly whispered shouts of "I love you." . . . . This afternoon a haunting tune . . of love runs through my mind, . . And weaves a simple tapestry . . Of life and love and you in harmony. . . . . When feelings get too big to fit . . Inside the cage of words, . . Although there are no words to say . . We go ahead and say them anyway. . . . . This evening I'm remembering . . the thoughts that filled my day; . . Inside my mind chorales unwind, . . The dissonance of life resolves to you. . . . . Tomorrow we can borrow . . just another day from God, . . Adoring each brief joy it brings . . That someday we will be remembering .

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Brian Strand

Date: 6/20/2020 12:09:00 PM

A lyrical procession of love John,how would we exist without our memories.

John Watt
Date: 6/21/2020 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Brian. The older I get, the more they mean to me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2020 8:19:00 PM

ahhh, yes, this was a well deserved win, my friend. Congratulations.

John Watt
Date: 3/28/2020 12:11:00 AM

Thanks, my friend. That 'ahhh' says so much!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2020 8:05:00 PM

where is this plastic bag poem you told me about? Or am I remembering it wrong?

John Watt
Date: 3/26/2020 9:54:00 PM

Haha, I see you found it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2020 8:04:00 PM

beautiful phrasings of beautiful thoughts, John. And the illustration. YOu are having a heyday!!!

John Watt
Date: 3/26/2020 9:54:00 PM

Feeling the love, thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2020 3:20:00 PM

The thunder's cries could not outdo/The softly whispered shouts of "I love you." - I love the contrast.

John Watt
Date: 3/26/2020 6:34:00 PM

Thank you, dear Kim, for noticing, and for leaving behind your thoughtful comment!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/26/2020 2:41:00 PM

So tender, John. Beautiful flow from verse to verse. Wonderful phrasing - "when feelings get too big to fit" - love it! Love the journey through your day - so many can relate this experience. Romantic yet real! Congratulations dear friend! Blessing to you!

John Watt
Date: 3/26/2020 6:38:00 PM

Sam, thank you for the thoughtful read through and delightful comment. This was one of my first songs to my sweet Janet back in our third month of dating. Thankfully, we can look back on many joyful days to remember.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/25/2020 10:14:00 PM

Moments of love, of life and of days caress the heart- the mind. This is beautiful, romantic and moving, all at the same time. The photo is of a couple in the rain. (Soft sigh) I love everything about the rain and its touch. You have created a masterpiece my sweet friend. Keep remembering the love. Each moment. ~ Brandy

John Watt
Date: 3/26/2020 9:25:00 AM

"Keep remembering the love". You do the same, dear friend. Thank you for spreading the kindness.