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Remember you

I open my eyes
to another day
as the sun climbs
I fade away
im carried to a place where i feel no pain
carried to a time before you went away

I still feel you close, feel you here
in this life we chose its all so clear
when I remember you, remember you

I close my eyes
from another day
as the moon blinds
I fade away
im carried to a place where i feel no pain
carried to a time before you went away

I still feel you close, feel you here
in this life we chose its all so clear
when I remember you, remember you

 

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Date: 11/25/2010 8:20:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun as fantastic .. check out the contests.. good luck with luv.. H.T. Day to u ..
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Date: 11/25/2010 6:41:00 AM
i feel her speaking to me. she was caried to a place where the pain could be removed. and the glory she recieved made her troubles seem like nothing. just like the bible says. the spirits are still useing you. john
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Date: 11/25/2010 6:39:00 AM
I like this alot...Love your work today... great use of words and feelings...Michael
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