Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Remember When

I remember when 
The sunset red that day
Like a fireball that sizzled
As it touched the lake

Slowly it decended_went away
Inch by inch it left to stay
Never before and not again
Did the sun set that red_my friend!  

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Sherese Gooden July 14, 2012 at 1:12 PM Dear Sara, this is striking. Glad I stopped by.

Michael J. Falotico July 14, 2012 at 12:46 PM Very we written piece my dear Sara. So enjoyed reading you again. Luv Michael

Cindy Cayton July 14, 2012 at 10:08 AM dear poet, I enjoyed reading your words today, and many thanks for your comment upon mine. :) much love to you, Cindy

The Situation July 13, 2012 at 6:10 PM i remember. morning i see it rising out of the city; God jewel in the sky. and watch those few monents when it allows us to see.

Jack Horne July 13, 2012 at 2:23 PM wonderful write, my friend - I could picture this one very clearly (a beautiful sight indeed)

Russell Sivey July 13, 2012 at 1:11 PM I think I like this poem better than the one you entered into the contest! This is a very beautiful write! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this red fireball of a poem! What an awesome piece, Great Work!!