Remember When

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I remember when The sunset red that day Like a fireball that sizzled As it touched the lake Slowly it decended_went away Inch by inch it left to stay Never before and not again Did the sun set that red_my friend!

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/14/2012 1:12:00 PM

Dear Sara, this is striking. Glad I stopped by.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/14/2012 12:46:00 PM

Very we written piece my dear Sara. So enjoyed reading you again. Luv Michael

Cindy Cayton

Date: 7/14/2012 10:08:00 AM

dear poet, I enjoyed reading your words today, and many thanks for your comment upon mine. :) much love to you, Cindy

The Situation

Date: 7/13/2012 6:10:00 PM

i remember. morning i see it rising out of the city; God jewel in the sky. and watch those few monents when it allows us to see.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2012 2:23:00 PM

wonderful write, my friend - I could picture this one very clearly (a beautiful sight indeed)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/13/2012 1:11:00 PM

I think I like this poem better than the one you entered into the contest! This is a very beautiful write! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this red fireball of a poem! What an awesome piece, Great Work!!