Angela Crabtree Poet Couplet

Remember To Breathe

So soon you forget me when work comes in play
I'm out of your mind while you're on display

Didn't you say this would not stress you out
it is what it is just a paycheck no doubt

I can already tell you are working unbarred
impressing the bosses who turned in your card

I am still here when you remember to breathe
or hold it all in as you puff up and seethe

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Vince Suzadail Jr. July 13, 2008 at 9:40 AM Attention seeking? We all need to breathe and ake the time for the important things. Vince

Matthew Anish July 6, 2008 at 2:53 PM Yes, Astrid, we should make time for those we care about. All work makes Jack a dull boy.Nice couplet!

Lena Townsend July 5, 2008 at 11:10 AM This is tough but well written. I hope things are great. glad to be back on the soup. Smiles from Lena

Sharon Winter July 4, 2008 at 6:45 AM Oh dear, Too much pressure for someone? Hmm, hope things change for the better. Great poetic expression in this couplet. Wish it was for a better reason. Love ya, Shar xoxo

Michael Degenhardt June 27, 2008 at 5:12 AM Ivy, hi! This couplet flows so well and describes well your caring nature, thinking of the other, expressing that you're there and offering advice. Wonderfully written. Michael

Kristin Reynolds June 27, 2008 at 3:19 AM I have a seether, too...but he is not afraid to let it out! lol Very well done, love the last...Love Kristin