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Remember My Youth Compare It Now

I lived in the early-mid 70s so very different
being a lonely soul not socially active
lived  in the countryside with not a friend
didn't really mind it as made me selective

This was me living my teens/early 20s
loved going to Wimpy bar in the night
after tea drove into town for coke or two
drive back on own this being my plight

When had a lunch break at work during the week
frequent local music shop nearly every day
loved to see what's pop to suit my taste
got posters Blondie, Kate Bush and ONJ

Put them on bedroom wall to gaze upon
sleep away think dreaming on each one
loved local movie house there often
Grease was fab great tunes bar none

It's incredible how things have changed
now musically classical's my top tune
never been to the cinema for 30 years long
till last week for Mary Poppins return with balloon

Now my drink bar is Costa Coffee
still lonely soul at times but my wife
Christine's my best friend eases my load
still, stammer as have all of my life

Big difference now God is with me
never to leave for Jesus sets me free


(Writing a poem describing myself as a teenager/young adult (early 20's)...then being descriptive about my present state for your last few stanzas.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/5/2019 6:17:00 PM
We had a cool Christmas here, breezy, which is perfect. Thank you: )
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/6/2019 2:45:00 AM
Hi Connie, pleased you had a nice Christmas, I was in bed for boxing day and half of next day (my birthday) with being sick, headache and a cold but much better now. Every blessing in 2019, Gordon
Date: 1/5/2019 11:24:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Gordon, such a vivid picture you have painted of your life and such a glorious companion that God has helped you choose! Be blessed, you and your wife always, Poetry wishes and a wonderful 2019! Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/5/2019 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer, Glad you liked it so much and for your kind wishes to us both for 2019, Trust your family and yourself have a real blessed new year too and look forward to reading more from your gifted pen, Gordon
Date: 1/4/2019 12:02:00 PM
Gordon, I enjoyed the journey from your youth to present day. I am glad you found your wife and companion. My husband and I are kind of loners so I can relate. So nice to meet you! Have a beautiful new year! : )
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/4/2019 12:20:00 PM
Hi Connie, Glad you enjoyed it and pleased to meet you too though have read a few of your writings in the past, How was Christmas in Hawaii? here in Scotland, it was quite dull and cold. Thanks again for dropping in, Blessings, Gordon

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