Remember Me

Remember me?
Shivering in the corner,
Afraid of your fists and rants
Hoping your mood would swing quickly
Wishing I could run,knowing I can't.
    Remember me?
Hiding in my bed at night
Deep under the sheets,not breathing
Praying he won't come for me tonight
Nasty words mixed with rage,seething
    Remember me?
Bearing the brunt of your rage
When I told you he touched me there
Innocent,I told you all of it,ashamed
Then you slammed me back in my cage
    Remember me?
Running,running as fast as I could
Looking for some sort of safety
I'd find it,I knew,if it only would
Reach out and gently embrace me
    Remember me?
Looking down at you,withered and dying
I reach within me to find some love
For this "mother" that left me crying
Finding none,I turn away
    When the darkness creeps over you
Ask your God for forgiveness as I can't 
Forgive what you've it m through
Rest well sweet Mother and.....
           Remember me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/11/2021 1:34:00 PM
Wow ~ A pleasure to find your poignant poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kelley
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Kelley Snyder
Date: 3/12/2021 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, I’m incredibly proud to have something so important published.
Date: 7/28/2016 2:06:00 AM
Kelley, Welcome to Poetry soup. It's a perfect poem.
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Kelley Snyder
Date: 10/8/2016 8:50:00 AM
Many thanks, Miltos
Date: 7/27/2016 2:25:00 AM
My mind swam with emotion as I read each word.Some things in life some heartaches in life do not heal.The scars I have wounded us so deeply and life never truly fade.You are a strong woman. I saw strength in every word you wrote.I saw your heart. There is truth.There is life.Kelly your heart your soul is deeply wounded. But the truth and Light to be found in the New Testament can Heal and will Heal every wound in your soul. If you ever find yourself in a place that you need a smile see my poetry
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Date: 10/8/2016 8:52:00 AM
I was torn between feeling pleased that you felt my work, and saddened that you felt my work. No person wants to make another feel pain and anguish... unless, of course... they're us. Thank you for the wonderful feedback.
Date: 7/27/2016 2:24:00 AM
My mind swam with emotion as I read each word.Some things in life some heartaches in life do not heal.The scars I have wounded us so deeply and life never truly fade.You are a strong woman. I saw strength in every word you wrote.I saw your heart. There is truth.There is life.Kelly your heart your soul is deeply wounded. But the truth and Light to be found in the New Testament can Heal and will Heal every wound in your soul. If you ever find yourself in a place that you need a smile see my poetry
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:07:00 PM
Kelley, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Kelley Snyder
Date: 10/8/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Linda...! What a great welcome..! I'm still figuring things out here but I so appreciate the warm acceptance
Date: 7/20/2016 5:37:00 PM
very emotional first post Kelly:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/8/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Jan..!
Date: 7/20/2016 11:09:00 AM
Kelley, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 10/8/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thanks,Skat... I really appreciate the warm welcome as I try and navigate my way around here.
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