Remember Me

One day our hearts will cease to beat,
Our minds will take defect,
The defect of death.
I wonder what people will say when im gone.
Will they still feel my bond,
My bond to my loved ones.
I cant stop my feeling of doubt,
If they every found out,
Found out how much i loved them.
And will the world remember my presence?
My positive essence?
And will my friends carry on my wild dreams,
I know I might never get my answer,
But i believe,
My words will last forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 1:58 PM
- Your words will last forever ...... loved and missed by your loved ones - A lovely poem, Ettie :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Christian-Bowling Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 4:37 PM
yes they will thank you for your comments-Love Ettie
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