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Remember Me

The sun shines yes I know A heavy gust as the wind wants to blow Leaves flying high in the sky and then hitting the ground The sun decides to fall as the moon decides to rise As darkness begins to be all around Remember my smile as the sun that shines Remember my breath as the wind blows Remember my feelings as the moon begins to rise Remember me even when I die The fire burns everything in sight But the rain rids its heat with all its might The cold weather is now here And the sun begins to disappear Remember my love as the fire burns Remember my pain as the rain falls Remember my hugs as the weather gets cold and dry Remember me even when I die The breeze cools everything and everyone down Even that sad person walking into town Listen to music on the days you have a frown And at night dream as you lay in your gown Remember my passion as the breezes begins to settle Remember my words as the music plays Remember my inspiration when you start to dream In the heavens I will be lifted up high So remember me even when I die © Jeremy Fennell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 5:34:00 PM
I loved this piece. It was such a pleasure to read, I am amazed about how much I liked it!
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