Remember

Remember when I fell Under your magic spell My heart caged in a cell I didn’t do so well Vainly trying to yell So broken I couldn't tell Anyone it felt like hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Great rhyming word play. Sad words giving great effect in rhyming combination.
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 5:10 PM
beautiful yet sad rhyme miss Sassy:-) hugs Jan xx
Chuan Seng Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Nice play of words, all can tell.. Nicely arranged, such rhymes can sell.. Love how your phrases a story they tell... Of hurt and frustration bordering to hell...
Sassy Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 5:41 PM
thank you...the words just seemed to gel...didn't have the heart to quell.... Sassy
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