Remember

Remember when I fell Under your magic spell My heart caged in a cell I didn’t do so well Vainly trying to yell So broken I couldn't tell Anyone it felt like hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/30/2015 6:25:00 PM
Great rhyming word play. Sad words giving great effect in rhyming combination.
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Date: 9/26/2015 5:10:00 PM
beautiful yet sad rhyme miss Sassy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2015 5:32:00 PM
Nice play of words, all can tell.. Nicely arranged, such rhymes can sell.. Love how your phrases a story they tell... Of hurt and frustration bordering to hell...
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Date: 9/25/2015 5:41:00 PM
thank you...the words just seemed to gel...didn't have the heart to quell.... Sassy
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