Remember

Make your poems Memorable,
That’s what I say.
No need to be incredible,
Just let them play.

Read them with your inner voice,
Write them that way too.
Hear the music in those words,
This I’m telling You.

In ancient times these poems were songs
Remembered off by heart.
At least you’d call them statements,
Knowledge to impart.

Iambic metre’s very common yes,
And so of course is rhyme:
To make these verses remembered
Through the course of time.

Yet verse is best as poetry,
Lyrical if you will.
We have to write with feeling,
And give the reader a thrill.

Paul Butters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 25, 2016 at 7:44 PM
PAUL, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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January 26, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Much appreciate that, Skat.
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December 25, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Good one about poetry..I like the way it flowed and what it had to say..Welcome to soup..Sara
Butters Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 4:48 AM
Thanks Sara. Much appreciated.
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December 25, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Paul, i could not put it any better if i spent the next ten years trying...Excellent!! :) john.
Butters Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Thanks John. My only quibble might be the ending, though I cannot explain why exactly. I do like writing poetry...about poetry. :)
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