Remember

Remember that embers 
                              that fade in November

May burn through the days [daze] 
                              that dismember[s] December

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Allan Koven

September 23, 2013 at 3:26 PM

Gosh, sounds like my longer poem Remembering I liked yours...short and sweet. Allan

Jon A Cavanaugh

September 11, 2013 at 7:21 AM

I finally found a poem that I hadn't commented on before. I love this poem. And it's short I love short poems. But you know this. You also know that I love your long poems.

John Loving Iii

February 28, 2013 at 2:47 PM

those embers that burn. only a few minutes ago.

Duke Beaufort

February 20, 2013 at 3:27 PM

Terry, Thanks for your comment. I never cease to be amazed!

Painted Hunter

February 10, 2013 at 11:25 AM

ok thats cool....

Elizabeth Wesley

January 28, 2013 at 9:13 PM

It doesn't hurt to read this a few times; it's a brain twister that fire my imagination! Loved it. Lizzie

Charmaine Chircop

January 28, 2013 at 9:34 AM

I always enjoying coming here to.read the thoughts you pen

Duke Beaufort

January 19, 2013 at 8:14 AM

Terry, a little something to keep us warm. It's charming alliteration.

Harry Horsman

January 17, 2013 at 8:53 AM

a little criptic but still i love what you write,, and it gives the mind an option to bathe in an illusion, and that cannot be bad... i've got to say Terry.. you are a wonderful poet, and i'm honoured when you comment thanks ...

Kathryn Collins

January 15, 2013 at 8:00 AM

Dear Terry - Who else would think to dismember December? love, Kathy

Sara Kendrick

January 14, 2013 at 4:04 PM

Interesting write..Reads like those embers stayed slightly red..Very descriptive...Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review of my work was encouraging..Sara