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You are the star that shines in my eyes, I am the man that comes in disguise; Like moths that flutters on wings of chance, We fly into arms that love to dance. On the balcony the rose vapor clings, And the nightingale joyfully sings; Bringing a light in my heart, a song of desire, A flame in my soul to light the fire. The soft embrace with a luscious kiss, The sighing moments of divine bliss; The still reflection of luminous eyes, Where passion flames and apathy dies. The archer's bowstring triggers a dart, An arrow to pierce your reckless heart; Fingers to tumble in your tangled hair, Arms to hold, a time to share. The hopes, the fires of lover's dreams, Flower in the light of soft moonbeams; The mist of night flows over us till, The wine of love has sipped its fill

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Date: 7/3/2012 6:17:00 PM
So romantic... even Cupid's arrow makes an appearance! Beautiful imagery and phrasing, and, of course, magnificent cadence and rhyme. :)
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:22:00 PM
simply love it.
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Date: 6/30/2011 7:32:00 PM
Love this..One of my favorites..Good work!
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Date: 6/24/2011 11:09:00 AM
Classic for for me and I m touched with heart the lines " The soft ................ and apathy dies". Nice, very nice feeling. Go ahead to conquer love. love,bl
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:45:00 AM
Very, very nice. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:30:00 AM
You set the scene beautifully here, and with such imaginative and poetic style too! A lovely romantic poem. Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/23/2011 11:17:00 PM
Enjoyed the easy flow of this write Elizebeth, also the depth of its emotional content, pleased to read you today..
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:06:00 PM
so much feeling, and so descriptive - thanks for this one, Rich
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and descriptive work..So passionate it is feeling my heart with feelings of warmth..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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