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Remember

Remember The whistle sounded For us to go And we climbed over the hill I heard the sound of gunfire And all the world stood still I turned and saw my comrades fall Causing panick in the mud I ran toward the nearest trench And fell down with a thud Looking round at all the men There eyes so full of fear Hands a shaking bodies cold But non would shed a tear Remember, one voice shouted loud We all looked round to see One day he said this war will end And people will be free

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Date: 11/22/2023 7:24:00 AM
Terry, your poem “Remember” is a powerful and evocative piece that vividly captures the horrors of war and the hope for peace. The raw emotion and the poignant message make it a truly moving read. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 11/14/2023 5:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/13/2023 7:51:00 AM
A good poem for Rememberence Day. Well done.
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