Remand

Remand A desperate prisoner Out on remand Am I Till sentence do us part On her hand Lamely hung; Inconsiderate And Irascible woman’s Husband- Suspect of love Treason (Heart’s betrayer) Defying reason To forever wear garb In a wrong season. JM 05th January 2014

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 1/19/2014 10:28:00 AM

I had a very emotional response to this piece for some reason that I cannot fully or accurately articulate. Your words stirred something in my Soul, which is why I read and write poetry in the first place :)

Joseph Matose
Date: 1/20/2014 12:26:00 AM

Thanks for your treasured comment. I'm happy to have stirred your emotions in a positive way. Friend, JM

Ken Carroll

Date: 1/5/2014 11:50:00 AM

Hi Joseph, A good dynamic write my friend.. Ken

Joseph Matose
Date: 1/5/2014 12:02:00 PM

Ken, Happy New Year, my Good Friend. Thanks for visiting me. Friend, JM