Remains of the Wilderness

he blew deep breaths into
the nostrils of the earth
hoping that it would 
raise his intelligence
to level of gothnicity

he cahsed them
across their fields of great yields
they ran with their hopes 
encrusted on their hopes
wings grew on their shoulders
helping them flee death

but their debt 
in the account of deathd 
was nurturing their misery
and the thirst of blood
in the heart of the god
kept swelling the gates
of hell ajar
and elongated the fingers
of the oracle

he tells her 'hush baby'
your turn to judgement
will set you free
but she feared not
for her soul was smeared 
with innocent blood
and crusted with transgretions
of her travels 
in the valley of human residence

the both of them loathed 
satan for he was freed of judgement
and the blood of J.C. 
They had killed and murded him 
in the eyes of nations
leisurely grazed on his 
whines and gnaws of pain
but still they smiled
at his cry for home

we run and hide from
these beasts 
but at the end of the road 
its them who will run from us 
for hate swells our ego
and strengthen our revenge

repent before they catch you
and make you pay...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/25/2008 11:22:00 PM
thank you people and welcome to poetry soup thato!!!!
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